Beach Delights

Cool breeze, wet sand, singing waves, shinning sky.

Author's Note

Please Note: The shinning sky for readers can be either morning which fills in sunshine or night that is filled with stars and moon.This is an experimental piece to try out a story comprising of eight words. Please suggest your views. It will help me ahead. Thanks.

Reviews

[Ronny]

Starts a bit chilly and gets warmer for each word.
Comforting piece.

Thanks for sharing Mitali :)

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks for liking it :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Cool breeze, wet sand, rising waves, shinning stars...
Cozy breath, warm hearts, silky touch, feelings charm...
Thirsty hearts n Dark is night...
Under the sky beach delights!

You wrote it very nice!

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks a lot Skyfall for elaborating it. You caught it right :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You're most welcome friend!

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I am an ocean addict and I really enjoyed your eight word story... it captures well the sense of contentment on this well described beach... and, it leaves the reader to picture this beach on their own minds with their own colours and sounds... lovely!!

[Mitali Shah]

Truly dear beach is always a delight for me. Thanks a lot :)

[Robert]

I thought of the night, which is so different than most poems that are in the daytime. But depending on the reader they could take it as day or night. I very nice piece, I'm astonished that you can write a poem in 8 words. I don't know if I could do that.

[Mitali Shah]

I agree with you Robert, I assumed it as night but then kept it on the readers choice to judge me as many go for daytime and many for night. Thanks for the appreciation dear :) Please never underestimate yourself Robert, even you can write it, don't lose hope and keep trying and you have written many superb pieces. All the best dear for new experiments and do go for it. :)

[Echoes of Eros]

After a long week, your words offer the softest breeze and most beautiful place of rest, of delight. I love the ocean, and could live at peace in your inspiration forever. xo

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you Eros :) beach is an absolute thorough delight.

[AaronFreitas]

I love the descriptions... beautiful work :)

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you Aaron :)

[Pratik Mishra]

Beautiful words, and a beautiful expression of beach delights. :)

[Mitali Shah]

thanks dear for appreciating :)

[Jamestown]

Beautiful write!
simple elegance and great imagery:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks for the review and blessings Jamestown :)

[Chirag Kumar]

These are one of the best feelings one could ever have next to love. Wonderful work didi :)

[Mitali Shah]

Absolutely Chirag. Thanks.