Cycle of love

Cycle of love

A Story by Mitali Shah
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Love gives you hope

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Gifted rose
Petals plucked
Fingers pricked
Oozed heart
Feels pain
Regained hope
Fresh start
Cycle continues
              

© 2015 Mitali Shah



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In the light of your words, the colors of love are reawakened. And yes, nothing can give the depth of hope that love does. xo

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago


Thank you Eros
I like the flow of thoughts n the words. They are true. Natural flow of things are necessary. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote for appreciating :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.
True love is never known if it is given up on. Thrust not your hands in the air in surrender, but thrust them out forward in an embrace.
Nice work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thank you Rickm for the appreciation :) God bless
The cycle always seems to continue that's a part of life as we all know it. Well done with such few words to express your thoughts.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thank you my friend Robert :) God bless
It is the way we grow and one day we will be ready for the One - having been getting ready all that time.
I loved the metaphor Mitali - very organic. Good job !! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much ANTO :)
Very true, I like the imagery here. As usual this is a good read

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Cassie
Love gives you hope- writely pointed out....nice one Mitu( Hope i can call u that, if u don't mind)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thanks again dear
sounds like life cycles,great write

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thanks again dear :)
 wordman

2 Years Ago

you`re welcome
Nothing is purer than a rose. No plant has more protection except for maybe a cactus. No flower holds more beauty more meaning than a rose. Great imagery here; thanks for sharing this poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thanks Jen for appreciating
Jen Walters

2 Years Ago

you're welcome; a rose is beautiful as is your poem.
Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear :)

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Added on July 12, 2015
Last Updated on July 12, 2015
Tags: love, hope, rose, heart, pain

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Mitali Shah
Mitali Shah

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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