Game of Fate

Game of Fate

A Story by Mitali Shah
"

Life is all about twists and turns

"

 

Her cheeks were shying red yesterday

Today they are reddened with blood

 

Vermillion on her forehead

Replaced by blood tonight

 

Flowers for first night

Turned out to be garland for coffin

 

Moans of passion

Redressed by mourns of revenge

 

Sheets were stained

But she was missing

 

Tears of happiness

Turn into tears of sad farewell

 

Red and green bangles on her wrists

Turned out to be iron handcuffs of his wrists

 

Bright lights in the room

Followed by dim

 

Replacing love story

Into worst nightmare

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2015 Mitali Shah



Author's Note

Mitali Shah
My first collabration with Chirag Kumar. Please share your views.

http://www.writerscafe.org/archive2194 [Chirag's Profile]

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A sad story in the poetry. Sweet dreams turn to pain and suffering.
"Red and green bangles on her wrists
Turned out to be iron handcuffs of his wrists"
Thank you for sharing the poem. A great effort of two writers.
Coyote



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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote for the appreciation :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.



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This is a sad one Mitu....
And in short words only it speaks something deep.....Thanks for sharing

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thanks Rajat :)
Thanks Mitali for posting our work :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
I liked it. Mitali, you write a lot about dangerous love. I hope your life is more peaceful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Haha yep Matt trying to explore the new facets of my writing. Thank you so much :)
Awesome collaboration :) I loved the descriptions in this write... two awesome writers, good job both of you :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Aaron :)
This has such a twist to it Mitali, you and Chirag did a splendid job with this piece, Bravo!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Robert :)
captured in a life she did not choose,sad,great colab

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Wordman :)
It is very well written, but hard to read. I am not as fond of sad stories.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Glad to know dear that you liked it. Thanks for reading :)
A sad story in the poetry. Sweet dreams turn to pain and suffering.
"Red and green bangles on her wrists
Turned out to be iron handcuffs of his wrists"
Thank you for sharing the poem. A great effort of two writers.
Coyote



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote for the appreciation :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
Well penned!
I just wrote a very similar piece myself :)
You version of life's twist and turns is fantastic,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much James :)

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Added on August 14, 2015
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Tags: cheeks, yesterday, today, blood, vermillion, flowers, first night, coffin, moans, passion, mourns, revenge, missing, bangles, farewell, iron handcuffs, love story, sad story

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Mitali Shah
Mitali Shah

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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