My version of Cinquain 3

i was inspired by the poetry type 'Cinquain'. its a kind of poetry wherein there are six lines, 1st line of 1 word, 2nd of 2 words, 3rd of 3 words n so on. the 6th line is of 1 word describin 1st wrd

 

He

Silently cries,

To fulfill wishes

Of others, he strives.

Deserves equal value and songs.

Father.

Author's Note

i have modified the rules of proper cinquain to just have fun with the poetry type. i liked the idea of writing such small poems but i did not adhere to the exact rules. please excuse me for that. hope you enjoy it :)

Reviews

[Tim Piotrowicz]

I like trying to guess what the topic is, and I didnt get this one until the end. I thought maybe it was a younger brother trying to be "as good" as his older siblings, but Father also makes sense. Done for Father's day?