Will you hear me?

You can't hear me because your soul is drenched in darkness.

Will you hear me?

I am calling out to you

Will you hear me?

I am wishing you will stay

Will you hear me?

I am eternally pledging myself to you

Will you hear me?

I am going to miss you

Will you hear me?

I am wholly in love with you

Will you hear me?

I am coming after you

Will you hear me?

I am never giving up on bringing you home

Will you hear me?

I am sorry your feelings are not as mine

Will you hear me?

I am so lonely without your presence

Will you hear me?

I am telling you to stay

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

              -Mizuki Tsukiakari

Reviews

[Liz]

I love love love this!
I can relate sooo much to this :D

[Gracie-San]

I love how you repeat the central theme of this poem which is "Will you hear me?" making the emotion of poem even more yearning than it already is.

Good write. :)

[Daydreamer54]

Wow i like this, such feelings of yearning! great poem u got here, keep it up!!!

[~*_Michelle_*~]

I see what the message is here, even though it takes a couple reads to fully understand it :) It was captivating. Good job