Rain is Precious

Rain is tears, wet and cold


Life is precious, to young and old


Rain is tears, falling from the darkness


Life is precious, cruel and heartless.



Mizuki Tsukiakari

Author's Note

I don't like calling this a poem. I prefer to call it a quote, since it's written as a quote in my poem book. I absolutely love it! It came to me randomly in Geometry...Hope you like it!

Reviews

[Luke Rawlings]

A poem, quote or prose. Whatever it may be it is very good. Do you mind if I quote you as a Facebook status? I love this piece, it is really good.

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

Sure, feel free to quote me as a Facebook status, just as long as my pen name is in there somewhere :) Thanks so much, you've certainly made my day
And yes, I'd like to consider this to be more of an original quote than an original poem. Thanks so much for the review!

[Rhea752]

Oh, Geometry. that's where I write lots of my poems. This is amazing. We treasure that which hurts us. well done. :)

[Castonovia]

Such truth, lovely indeed, short, but sweet with lyrical, realistic notions ;)

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

Thanks for the review :)

[Castonovia]

Anytime :p

[Jetta Zippora]

Brilliant! I love it, friend. Nice write.

[Rose Tyler]

This is great, I love it!

[HereWithoutYou<3]

It's awesome I really like the " Life is precious, cruel and heartless" XD Awesome!

[CarolynLewisPoe]

this is a really great quote! it flows really well and the rhym scheme is great too! Keep writing and im sure you'll do well!!

[Cassiopia Summers]

Of course I like it!! I really thought this was great, and it definitely fits you lol, with your thing for rain. (: Wonderful quote, I enjoyed it.

[Hello, Goodbye]

This is poetic brevity.. It holds a mighty punch and the message is resolute and memorable even in its small form.. the structure is precise and its intent well placed. I love it..