I'd fly to you

If I could fly to anywhere

I'd fly to you without a care

though rejection is of course a fear

thats why I keep the shadows near

I hide in longing and in pain

because I know I'll never change

Reviews

[E. Rains]

You put a lot of emiotion into few words...great job!

[Call me Jane]

is that a sad or a happy poem? good write

[Constance L. Hartwell]

what a delightful poem. the rhyme scheme was beautiful and it reminds me of a certain "person." you have amazing talent. kudos

[Phantom Heart]

Don't know what I'd say to this poem, but I like it.
The lines: "thats why I keep the shadows near", and "I hide in longing and in pain" are fantastic.
Keep up the good work.