Let it be

 

What does it mean to free one’s mind?

To truly let it go,

no more burdens, thoughts unclear,

finally free to grow.

How we limit ourselves, our minds

With guilt, worry and fear.

Here’s a tangible solution,

the answer is quite clear.

Now open the doors to your mind

and let it just run free.

At first it will run oh so wild,

relax and let it be.

As time runs on, it will run down

and rest contentedly

A mind is like a beast of sorts,

it truly must be free

So sit back and relax my friend.

Just try and let it be.

Understanding comes from trying.

Trust me, you wait and see.

 

~Melody

 

 

Reviews

[Harlon Rivers]

Most excellent thoughts, Melody..Finding freedom can be complex because it is not always as it seems. Don't wish to taint the positiveness of an inspirational message in your fine poem. as your words say it all...Thanks for a great read to start my day...

[Brittany]

I just love how inspiration and uplighting your poetry is. A definite day brighter. Thank you for being a shining star. Your words, phrases, and flow are so well done. Presentation excellent. Nice choice of visual and song.

[MELODY CARNEY aka Kimberly Melody Gutierrez]

I am humbled by all that you say, as with all the kind words spoken regarding my poetry. I will always be; Searching for the simplicity inside complexity and strive to share its beauty.

[Skye]

So beautiful! I love the flow to your words, and that they mean something. On a side note, my dad heard the song and was like "yes!" lol

[Rhea]

beautiful.. i enjoyed this. you've done this in a very relaxing tone. and picture goes well with it... your words are very relaxing and energizing. i loved this!
Gotta shelve this one!!!

[Dez H.]

I like this. it is so true, Sometimes we need to just let s**t be. I admit i'm a victim of over analyzing everything but sometimes I do pause and let everything around me to just pass by as it will. I love it.

[lynn]

A gem :) Your positive thoughts make my heart smile :))

[Mockingbird]

these words can be spoken to us while trying to meditate and clear one's mind. it's a very difficult thing to do to free your mind and just be especially when you have so much on your mind. i think this would take a lot of practice.

[Pencrafter]

You poem has a beautiful simplicity with a positive feel. It expresses how our perception and attitude have such a powerful affect upon our own peace and contentment. Reading some of your writing is like walking on a grass-covered hillside in the country, with a summertime ambiance.

[Ink Angel]

Ohhh! This is a priceless piece,a very spiritual feel to it ! very uplifting. My favorite Cold play number. Thank you for sharing :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Awesome. I loved this. Amazing

[Amila Jay]

A bit like meditation. Its a great poem :))