I AM!

Sometime when we think God didn’t answer our prayers, we just didn't realize he did by giving us the strength to do it ourselves.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 I AM!

Truly, I am,

 

a woman that has been beat down,

crawling on hands and knees.

Begging for God to make it stop,

He answered none of these.

Who will be the one to end this,

to make this nightmare cease?

 

I AM!

Truly, I am,

 

a woman that has fought to leave,

to build a better life.

Homeless, shelters and hungry kids,

strangers craving such strife.

Who will help me find us a home,

someone more than a wife?

 

I AM!

Truly, I am,

 

a mother alone full of fear,

searching for a new way.

My children so dear and trusting,

unsure of what to say.

Who will make this all turn around,

to make blue skies from grey?

 

I AM!

Truly, I am,

 

the one to reach deep down inside,

Move forward and not stray.

A woman with my head held high,

No longer scared to say,

Who is worth everything I did?

Who found a brand new way?

 

I AM!

I AM!

I AM!

 

~Melody

Reviews

[Riley]

I love this poem it is very inspirational! Being a strong woman who is independent and doesn't need a man to help her, she is able to pull through on her own. I admire that strength in a woman. I have a friend who would relate well to this poem and I admire her strength and endurance through the strife of her life. I will have to share this with her!

[MELODY CARNEY aka Kimberly Melody Gutierrez]

Thank you ,though I must admit that I am a strong woman and I don't need a man...but, the one I am with I wouldn't want to be without.

[carol burgess romance]

I understand this only too well....if you check my writing I have a poem Fragments on a similar topic..that seems now a life time ago...and I also had to wait a long time to be able to write away the pain.

[WILDERNESS]

Brilliant, to put it simply,,,and what a powerful writing..................thankyou for sharing in a masterly poem.................

[MELODY CARNEY aka Kimberly Melody Gutierrez]

You are oh so kind!

[Melobldnfr]

:'-} Understanding, yes. Am working on such changes now myself. No kids in tow, but still scary! Thanks for sharing. Well penned!

[Purplerose]

How beautiful this is. We so many things at one time, yet we are so strong. :)

[Dhaye]

I really love this poem. You're a great writer! Thank you fro sharing your piece.

[ROSALIND]

I am surprised you haven't had a rating yet ......

[MELODY CARNEY aka Kimberly Melody Gutierrez]

I do not want my work rated...simply read and understood;)

[Midnight Queen (Amanda)]

very inspirational!

[Le parisien]

Incredibly beautiful ! Ma'am, you deserve all our respect, and I'm not saying that because of the good quality of the poem ;) !

[Nicky Sarti]

Love love LOVE this!

[Mary]

magnificent in every way, Melody! YOU ARE! not negative...TRIUMPHANT! and beautifully written as well. Thank you for posting this