Shhh, can you hear me?

Shhh, here the misty waters fall

They are calling your name

The birds also beckon and call

Asking of you the same

 

Come abide with me, rest your head

Restore your weary soul

Lavish in my earths cool soil deep

What once broken, now whole

 

Why am I left and forgotten

I hold healing for thee

You break me down, cut me away

All life once came from me

 

Shhh, can you hear me calling you

The wind guides you to me

Open your soul to understand

Embrace me and you’ll be free

 

~Melody

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

To me, your poem expresses the beautiful gifts from our Creator. There are three distinct items mentioned here. One is the actual physical beauty of creation. Another is our ability to perceive and appreciate the waterfalls and forests. The third is the effect it has on us, to imbue a spirit of calm and peace. While the words of the poem are very descriptive, the pictures are even more so.

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How touching! I love the first and last phrase reminds me of the days I used to go hiking with my parents.

[Miss. Smith]

This is a wonderful poem. I can almost see what I like to call the Source ( mother nature, god, creator etc.) coming out of this poem and the message it brings across. Loved it!

[Lunny]

I understand, or at least I think I do, what it's about but I'm not impressed, it's good.

[marytownsend]

There is such peace in nature, it speaks to a deep longing in us to return to the garden and be one with our surroundings. This is a beautiful, well written poem!!

[Riley]

Lovely thoughts! Tranquil thoughts and very relaxing and peaceful. Reading this poem I kept thinking of those nature CDs and could hear it in my mind :)

[JanieB]

Lovely poem..so serene and beautiful. Music works well too.

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

This is beautiful and refreshing, and the soothing words of your poem bring us to the realization of the purpose and reason for creation, by the Creator - to give us comfort and solace. Lovely picture and very effective title.

[Legolas]

Beautiful poem. The music compliments it nicely. I love nature and I appreciate it very much. Great job.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Beautiful poem! I loved it, in it's entirety.

[Pax]

nature..love nature. good job