Why?

Why?

A Poem by mmzx

Why are you doing this to me,
why are you doing it now?
What wrong have I done to you,
what mistake have I made?

I don't deserve this ,
you giving off this vibe;
this cold shoulder treatment.

Ever since you knew that girl,
you neglected me completely,
why oh why best friend?
What good is she to you?

I feel envious all the time,
your avoiding me, ignoring me,
as though I am not there.

We used to be so close,
the best of friends.
But now, we don't know who you are.

Your leaving me in misery,
can't you see?


 

© 2009 mmzx


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Ah, such a small palette with which to paint at your age, but still a nice statement of your feelings. Check the pronoun in the 2nd to the last paragraph - I think you mnean 'I don't know who you are.'

Posted 14 Years Ago


Such a vivid, painful message. You express the hurt so honestly. Amazing write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


We all need to know why at one time or another. Great Write

Posted 14 Years Ago



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mmzx
mmzx

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I go by the name Munn. I am 16, I think. I like poetry writing. I like reading quotes. I like acoustic music. Also, I like you. more..

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