i walk with you

frm a departed mother

It was too early for adieu.

But the decision came out of the blue

For both me and you…

 

 

But I departed only from the rest,

You never knew ..

That I’d still walk with you…

 

Life may have changed

Everything may seem untrue.

But I still walk with you..

 

 

I can never part with you

for you came from my womb..

Forever I’ll walk with you…

 

To see if you're germinating

The way I wanted you to,

I still walk with you…

 

 

In your journey of life,

Paths you’re forced to go through,

I’d still walk with you..

 

 

But Pain won’t last long.

You’d find your someone soon..

And then I’ll have to leave you…!

 

Reviews

[Thomas Fleet]

I love it. Definitely could be turned into a great song, I know.
The repition of "I'll walk with you" adds amazing affect to it.
It's just packed with emotion. Great write! :)

[St.Jimmy]

this is so soothing and very well expressed
this conveys that a girl continues her journey with her love ignoring all the sweeps and curves of life and ignoring all his mistakes but ultimately she had leave him because he left no option to her and chosen someone else
very well expressed
~Aaradhya

[deeps]

This is so heart breaking.
So well expressed.

[Aditya Unni]

O_O a bit scary.