1. *Prologue*

1. *Prologue*

A Chapter by Lynaelee

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Her blue eyes sparkle with a hint of mischief. Her smile radiates throughout the whole room. Her dimples are ever present on her cheek. When she's talking to someone, she stands tall. When she is not at work and has a minute to herself, she immerses herself in a book and hides her face with her long blonde locks. Her baggy clothes do little to hide her petite frame with luscious curves. She tries to be invisible, but her beauty springs from within and won't be overlooked. To be told about her would make you question reality. To see and touch her would make all your fantasies come true. She was the perfect mark. But the thing that made her the most desirable, had nothing to do with any of that. It was positively confirmed that a few months of research needed to be turned into years, and it could not be completed from a distance any longer. She was perfect and soon Sarah Annette Gibson will no longer be available for the public eye. With a final look and nod, a picture was painted in the mind and it would be so. Nothing could deter this new path. Yes. Sooner was better.
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© 2017 Lynaelee


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Good cliffhanger and detail of the girl. I'm not crazy on Prologues, but this one is pretty good to keep people reading. Though I would make one suggestion, you may want to go back and reword some of the sentences so that they are more concise. For example the sentence "A few months research...any more." might be a bit confusing to readers. I had to read it a few times to understand what you were saying. I look forward to reading more.

Craig

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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Good cliffhanger and detail of the girl. I'm not crazy on Prologues, but this one is pretty good to keep people reading. Though I would make one suggestion, you may want to go back and reword some of the sentences so that they are more concise. For example the sentence "A few months research...any more." might be a bit confusing to readers. I had to read it a few times to understand what you were saying. I look forward to reading more.

Craig

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Geat vivid imagery of an eye catching girl, yo have caputured a head turner perfectly.

Well done on a great opener of Saran Annette Gibson, who i am sure will turn out to have something of an eyeopener of a story to follow.

Mark

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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