needle point

dark embrace let me escape the world again, for iam to heavy inclined wth the needle in my hand ,to stab and to let it sink into my arm , tearing away the flesh, so all else can be empty again,until my heart rips out of my chest,until... what else can their be left.
Imaging all these things make me cry and weep ,my hands tremble in their wake to feel the ozing again, but the drugs just make me more depressed. an escape
To leave a cruel world behind and let my soul fly

Author's Note

please write reviews would appreciate!
a few typos .

Reviews

[Shelby Baker]

Gets the point across why some poeple use plus it's expresses feeling and makes the reading feel it.