Razed

Razed

A Poem by May B. Laidur
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A Haiku I needed to write down.

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My village was razed.

I had almost nothing left.

Then she came to me...

© 2015 May B. Laidur


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Well done. I like it. Keep up the good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago
I am now expert in haiku, but i like it. I like the tone of hope in "Then she came to me..." and the "..." kind of points us to a happy ending

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May B. Laidur

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much!

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Added on September 10, 2015
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Tags: village, legend, razed

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May B. Laidur
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