bonfire

bonfire

A Poem by MohamedBencharef
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in the night before the battle and you with your friends gathered around a bonfire inspired from the song of ice and fire

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Only fire ! Can smoke out the blood , only fire! Can clear up the flood, only fire! Can tear us to shreds. 
When light hides ! And the lighting strike the lies !then the crows fly if not dies !for the loss we will rise! Then stand if the great hand cries !Only if Beauty bleed from its eyes ! Then seek where honor lies. 
When the fire! Flames to Burn us bright ,when the fire! In the dark giving us sight ! When the fire! Appears from the sunlight! When the fire! Appears for the right ! When the fire! Courage us to fight !
If we live tonight then tomorrow we'll glow forever , but if not then we'll die together , in the sky everyone will be called a brother, this night is not for us only for the other , the one we called her a mother , she was strong and loyalty made her suffer , tonight I stand to say never, cause tomorrow I'll see my lover .
Follow the fire! To see the enemy knife! Follow the fire! And you might save someone's life! Follow the fire! We'll wound the soul of this strife ! Follow the fire! And say goodbye before you dive! Follow the fire! You might not walk out alive! 
The skies will rain with evil filled with shame, the clouds will scream and shout your name, we're all made from flesh and we're all fear the same, running from fear this is the only thing lame. 
When the crows rest on our corpses , and the sun might burn our houses , we all will bleed from our noses, we'll celebrate with wine . we drink doses, and home will come filled with roses, our faces will be covered with bruises, we walked through a drowning river kinda like Moses.
Tonight we wear war paint and fight the night , from home no one will be late, remember that mate

© 2016 MohamedBencharef


Author's Note

MohamedBencharef
in the night before the battle and you with your friends gathered around a bonfire
song of ice and fire is an awesome book , shame I didn't know that until yesterday
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I believe I read another piece of yours a few days ago and if that is the case, this is far above the quality of the last piece. Now if I am wrong, it is still a powerful piece. There are some sections that I felt could use a little finesse, but you are doing a very good job. It was at the beginning that I almost stopped read but came back and I am glad I did. well done.

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I believe I read another piece of yours a few days ago and if that is the case, this is far above the quality of the last piece. Now if I am wrong, it is still a powerful piece. There are some sections that I felt could use a little finesse, but you are doing a very good job. It was at the beginning that I almost stopped read but came back and I am glad I did. well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was very interesting, friend. :) I loved it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MohamedBencharef

8 Years Ago

getting your interest make me feel proud, thank you
this is amazing!!!! I love this Poem!!! Keep up the amazing work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MohamedBencharef

8 Years Ago

thank you silver , you have very kind tone
Rose Jaeger Kaneki

8 Years Ago

welcome, anytime. and thanks

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Added on December 12, 2015
Last Updated on April 23, 2016
Tags: war, death, fear, life, sad

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MohamedBencharef
MohamedBencharef

jijel, algerie, Algeria



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I am a human who wishes he can admire more wonders . but the light in my eyes is fading and I'll drop all I can before I go for good . I walk by many names like Firo ,Moha , the idiot , dumb a*s , th.. more..

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