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Your Soul Shines Through Me

You are getting used to this. 

 

 

yellow

welcoming another day for us

the radiant sun reflecting off the snow

shimmering through the thin fabric

And mirroring the luminescence within

your genuinely content eyes

as they open to an unveiled morning

intensifying the smile on your face

bringing a sincere joy never felt before

knowing that we have endless mornings 

to experience

 

 

I am getting use to this too.

Reviews

[Sara]

what a gorgeous, uplifting poem -- there is such honesty here, like you're truly sharing a connection with another person, with life itself. there seems to be sincere brightness and happiness running through your words, and your use of language is very beautiful, but doesn't overpower or bring down the poem at all. excellent little piece, good job. :) i love the little message buried inside it as well, too cute ;)

[Aiza]

Your Soul Shines Through Me.

maybe it's silly of me, but i long for that feeling.
anywho, i love this very much and i'm glad you share your writing.

[Bexers]

I enjoyed this poem way to much! I really really did. It sounds like the speaker is either taking personal success in learning to enjoy a sunrise or is enjoying it with a partner (or otherwise). Well, that's what I thought of at least.

Great work!!