The Monster Ball

The Monster Ball

A Poem by Michael Stevens

Dancing with the Devil, I guess!


Some days, I'm attending the Monster Ball,

where my anger and poor judgment are all

mixed together in a face of unreasonable, so,

I've arrived and left reason at the door, 'no

admittance, pal!' Everybody here already pisses

me off; I know I'm out of control, but I missed

the lecture on keeping it together

I shouldn't dance to this tune, not now, not ever!

© 2017 Michael Stevens

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Anger is an emotion that can have severe consequences if not controlled. It can destroy a person and people around him/her
Your poem depicts the emotion of a person going through the emotion anger and you've displayed that emotion and rage through abstract thinking which is amazing.
Just a few lines need smoothening so that when read they don't create a blockage in the poems flow

Posted 10 Months Ago

Michael Stevens

10 Months Ago

Thank you, and I don't claim to be the word's best poemer!

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Added on September 15, 2017
Last Updated on September 15, 2017
Tags: Anger, uncontrolled


Michael Stevens
Michael Stevens

I write for fun; I write comedy pieces and some dramatic stuff. I have no formal writing education, and I have a fear of being told I suck, and maybe I should give up on writing, and get a job makin.. more..