Stirring Me Slowly

Stirring Me Slowly

A Poem by Monday Parker

I’m starting to float on your words

Your images arrest my thoughts

Wandering

I feel the sparkle of your lips

Of our passion

The heat in our kiss

Flaming

Storming my intelligence with your face

Striking sapphire

Tantalizing

Tempting precision

Shaking my soul

Like limber dogwood leafs

In April breeze

Observe how easy you stir me

In the whirlwind of your shadow

In the elegance of your poetic hands

Of your supple touch

In the glint of your eyes as you gaze over me

 

 

 

 


© 2008 Monday Parker



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A softly whimsical poem that swirls with good autumn imagery blended with longing. Love your dynamic verbs & uninhibited descriptions. Love the title - it draws me in, wanting to read more (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Week Ago


Gentle, wonderful and amazing use of words and thoughts. The poem made the feel the need and the emotions in the words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
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Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Sounds good and pretty intoxicating with your words!! Yeh.. I think, you are really very better with your words .. Ha! Nice imagery. I enjoyed it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Adore your writing simply elegant and neatly crafted

Posted 3 Years Ago


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I love it:) I am hooked now!

Posted 4 Years Ago


A very pleasant and light feel you've conveyed. Great description; well chosen words. Nice!

Posted 6 Years Ago


"Like limber dogwood leafs

In April breeze

Observe how easy you stir me"

Excellent. You have a gift with words.



Posted 6 Years Ago


very nicely written Monday, subtle and elegant!

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is broken up very nicely. You keep it flowing enough to make it sound nice and short enough to make it re-readable. You also use very POETIC imagery which escapes most "poets" so that's also very good. I would say this is a very strong piece. I like it very much and will be "favorite-ing" it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


love the imagery in this .. beautifully done ..overall I thought this was a very impressive write ..nice job..

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on February 8, 2008
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Monday Parker
Monday Parker

Sacramento, CA



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