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Call Me Baby

Call Me Baby

A Poem by Monday Parker

Call me baby again

I like how it sounds coming from your mouth

Forget that I’m not yours and this is false

Comfort and closeness

Just don’t think about it

And call me baby again


© 2009 Monday Parker



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I have to admit, I had to look at the reviews to see how many people would call you Baby. Quite a few. But I don't know about it just being a 'decent' poem. I loved it. It has a real sweet harsh edge to it. Enough aggression to carry through any comment, especially hypocracy and falsity. In fact the more I read it, the more I like. Thank you for posting this. Great read for the morning

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Baby.

See what you made me do?

Forget that I'm not yours.... just a fleeting feeling to enjoy and then pass ... Very nice.

Posted 7 Years Ago


i like the attitude of this one. it's very sassy, almost. that might not be the right word, but you get my drift. :]
good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Monday Parker
Monday Parker

Sacramento, CA



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