Date Night

Date Night

A Poem by MM Smith
"

Tovli's Ten

"
Candles, wrought iron;
her history stumbles out.
Thinking in past-tense she wants to ask
"Which part of this story was relevant?"
"How did I worm out of owning my life?"
Instead she returns to being fine-dined,
bread
dripping in oil.


© 2015 MM Smith


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I agree with Tovli. A very creative use of the "10".

Helena :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like this. It has a real charm and has the potential of exploding into a really nice micro-fiction piece. thanks for submitting it. tovli

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MM Smith

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. I have never submitted anything publicly before. Of course I am thinking of a.. read more

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