Let Them

Let them burn,

In the love of hatred

Let them crave,

For what is not destined

Let them desire,

For the non-existing truth

Let them wait,

For things invisible

Let them shout,

For no one will hear

Let them cry

For no one will see the tears

Let them trust,

For what they don’t know is

Unreal,

Plastic and

Lie.

Reviews

[boygene borice]

beautiful. it sounds musical

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong, hard and direct thoughts. I like the honest tone and the good ending. You made your point in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Michelle Rachel]

Wow. That is...I don't know how to explain it...That was amazing, great job...

[iamshadowine]

Thank you very much

[Meshalini]

I don't know how to tell you my thoughts about this poem but it's really amazing..

Great poem.... Good job..

[iamshadowine]

Thank you very much :)

[Elizabeth J. Gelinger]

Great poem, strong and well written. Also with a beautiful message. Congratulations.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[PoeticChico]

Great stuff... I liked it :)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Nwang]

This is an excellent piece. Another great poem. Loved it .

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Abhilash Hegde]

A very thoughtful poem. There are so many layers to this write and meanings that strike a reader.
For all things that exist and seem real may indeed be a facade of lies and plastic in substance... Nice one, Shadowine!

[iamshadowine]

Thank. You :)

[KittiesRulez]

Yet again another great poem, you are an outstanding writer! Where do all these ideas come from? They're utterly amazing ^~^ Please continue writing, so I can keep reading your words of wisdom :)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much! It means a lot :))

[Emily]

Love this!!
Keep on writing!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)