Journal as Memories

Journal as Memories

A Poem by Shuchita

AS SHE TURNED ANOTHER PAGE OF HER JOURNAL,

“I was so stupid” she told herself,

And laughed,

While TEARS ROLLED FROM HER EYES,

AND

MEMORIES FLASHED IN HER MIND,

Some sad,

Some happy,

Some same people,

While some left

Some new friends,

While some old became even more close

But it didn’t matter

Because the time gone

Won’t be back again


© 2017 Shuchita



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memories have several shades and shapes..but are always an asset..few as happiness and others as lessons..nice work.. i like it

Posted 9 Months Ago


Ur writing style n thoughts... It's like awesome.... Keep it up.....

Posted 9 Months Ago


people come and go, unexpected happens but still time keeps on ticking and life continues.

a nice piece of work.:)

Posted 10 Months Ago


Shuchita

9 Months Ago

thank you :)
a nice write, too many some, some, somes, for me, slightly jarring or repetitive for me. i would prefer some sad, others happy, same people, but some left,
now new friends, although it didn't matter, with time gone, i won't be back again. Thats my take but i'm no expert.lol

Posted 11 Months Ago


Shuchita

9 Months Ago

thank you!!
Moments are all we have so it is said, the older I become, the more I realise the truth in that statement, lovely piece...

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shuchita

1 Year Ago

thank you!
Because the time gone
Won't be back again

True, you can't go back in time once it is done, but you can look back through time.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shuchita

1 Year Ago

thank you! :D
True. Feel like I get a flashback. And visuals from High school again. I never had much! Didn't have many friends either. Wasn't exactly popular at the least. But with what I did have. I still have memories that I wish I could go back and replay . Even despite the socially awkwardness. It was well worth it. A much enjoyed read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shuchita

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much
I love keeping a journal. These feelings are real. Good one. I just want more imagery on this one maybe. Keep writing. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shuchita

1 Year Ago

Thank you!
life is like keeping a journal, even if we don't literally...each day's closure is the words we put down on the white...we fill the spaces with our lives' moments and thoughts...and we might look at those pages again, but we will never live what goes on them again.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shuchita

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your review
I feel every person we meet is a page in the journal of life. Depends on us if we want to bookmark it or completely tear it off that journal.
Well penned.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shuchita

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much
Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

You're welcome 😊

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Hey everyone! I am Shuchita. I do a lot of stuff related to literature, its my passion. Obsessions: 1) Books 2) Feathers 3) Suits 4) F.R.I.E.N.D.S. When a poet digs himself into a hole.. more..

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