Extinguish

Extinguish

A Poem by iamshadowine

As my demons ignited a fire,

Its flames increased by every

Passing day, neither angels

Nor god, could extinguish

The fire away

© 2017 iamshadowine


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This is intense and short and incredibly brilliant!! It took me a minute to find the rhythm but I absolutely love it !

Posted 4 Years Ago


very enthusiastic poem.feels motivated by ur lovely poem

Posted 5 Years Ago


A very powerful and deep poem. Sometimes it's hard to see a light out of the darkness that surrounds us and it begins to eat away at us. The fire within begins to burn till nothing is left but ashes.

Thank you for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Fire engrave within thy soul,
Blazes without a goal~



Posted 6 Years Ago


Some fires cannot be put out. Make us thirst for life and dreams. I liked the strength of the words leading to proper ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


An exquisite example of how something so short could be so powerful. Thought-provoking as well. Excellent!

Posted 6 Years Ago


This was wonderfully conveyed. It was short but powerful. Really loved it

Posted 6 Years Ago


I love this! Short and to the point: you convey wonderfully dark imagery

Posted 6 Years Ago


True feelings were very well expressed. I really liked the honest tone of this poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


iamshadowine

6 Years Ago

thank you! =)
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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Added on September 5, 2017
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