4 words

4 words

A Poem by Revenge<3'sMe
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Gerrad...

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4 words

Asking a simple question
Hurt so bad
Asking if you'd miss me
Never knew it would back fire

Loved you, still do
But why must you cause me
Pain?
Do you not see how I hurt?
Do you not care?

But the your answer cut the deepest
Only four words
'I won't miss you'


© 2010 Revenge<3'sMe


Author's Note

Revenge<3'sMe
This happened today and he kept asking what's wrong...


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this is very touching and hurting i felt the same in my life and i was so bad
great work :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


hearttugging and so emotional. Such deepness & sadness in your words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is really deep. it remind me of a song called Enta Eih. its in arabic but they have the lyrics on myspace and the lyrics remind me of what your saying. You should check it out cause i see you like music. lol :) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wae5Vm2EuMA

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really liked this. The shortness of the piece really conveys the sharpness of the topic, it's like the blade of an axe. Clean-cut and efficiently painful. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was an amazing right. Powerful and painful. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow really hurtful and good. good poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short, but tragic. I was sad to read this, beautiful thought it was.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Stupid butthole, Gerrad. He doesn't even know what made you sad. I'll talk to him about it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


the only correction here is your tenth line where you typed:

But the your answer cut the deepest -be careful, typos.

It was a short poem, but I could feel your pain. I've been through this s**t and it ain't one bit pleasant. I'm so sorry =/ *hugs you*!!

-Wella.



Posted 13 Years Ago



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