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The End

The End

A Poem by Summer R
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just a quick poem for practice,been awhile.

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The end has arrived
We tried the best we can
begged,pleaded
open your minds

but alas we claim defeat
all will perish under their feet
all will gone
no freedom is strong

Once again it all falls
Once again most human trace erased

The circle will begin again
always the same fate
live,die,repeat



© 2017 Summer R



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Good write , you meant Alas , I think.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Summer R

2 Months Ago

Thankyou,,yes i did. i really need to to watch my spelling. Sometimes i type way to fast and get ahe.. read more
Thanks,yea i love to write but cant spell the greatest,lol.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Hi, you definitely display the cycle of existence. I love how raw and passionate the words are, very expressive.
small edit:
all will parish under their feet
I think you meant to type perish.
Great writing, i'm a fan of your style.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Summer R
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Hi, I have been wrighting since i was 12 years old,,i started with short stories and have written quit a few but seeing i was very young i donot display that work. But in the last 10 or 12 years i h.. more..

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A Poem by Summer R