the innoccent

the innoccent

A Poem by Summer R

I look and i smile

So innocent and brave

Full of curious wonder carrying through out each day

Playing and laughing from morning till night

Believing in fairy's and bumps in the night

Crawling under covers and cuddling away all the bad dreams that wake you in fright

Innocence in all you see

Make believe your favorite glee

Amazing little bodies growing with speed

Learning with great intensity

Nothing can ever compare

To what we share

So innocent and brave

I wish it could always be that way

Keep at bay all those bad days

But i will always be there and cuddle no matter what age


© 2008 Summer R



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heartfelt and smooth flow really stand out with sincere pondering that really makes the reader feel like a kid again, in the way of what defines the magic of youth and imagination, excellent form.
and a pleasure to read such nostalgic insight

Posted 8 Years Ago


For some reason this line made me smile. "Believing in fairy's and bumps in the night"

I like the point this poem is getting across but the only negative feedback I can give you is that it is obvious you were trying to force the rhyme but no worries! That happens to me too. Practice makes perfect.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on October 28, 2008

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