Better off alone

Better off alone

A Poem by Summer R

What is love but a four letter word

That no longer has any meaning

All that's left to be felt

Pain, Anquish

Confused with doubt

Everyone lie's

Everyone's bitter

No good left to hinder

Hinder the greed

Hinder the selfishness

Hinder the lust of an exciting new touch

Running rampant

Spreader ever faster

Taking full control of a race heading for disaster


All the stories

Fairytales held dear

Just a false hope covering what is really there

build up just to tear down

So all you do is walk around with a frown

Heart full hurt.................


Mind torn and forlorn..............................


A soul grown bitter cold..............................


Better off alone

© 2008 Summer R

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They say can’t live with them can’t live without them
I’m tore between the two so when reading your work I could
See the love hate relation in where I’d rather be alone
sometimes. good writing

Posted 8 Years Ago

wow, there are so many ways to look at this, and so many ways i'm sure most people can relate to the meaning of betrayal and heartbreak, this is really heartbreaking, sad and perfectly written, brilliantly done

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on December 16, 2008
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