Are you really Listening?

Listen! Did you hear that?
Sounds like thunder from a really
bad storm. No, listen__
Sounds like your little brother
practicing on his drums.
Hush and Listen__
Maybe it's just the sound of the
bombs from the nearby Army Base
during their practice session.
Ok, be quiet now. I mean really
Listen___
It's the sound of children's
lil' footsteps while playing
hopscotch in heaven!
You weren't really Listening__
were you?

Reviews

[Writer Of Life]

Beautiful, we all do need to listen more intently.

Thank you for reminding me that we should stop and listen more. Yes, I adore the smell of my lil ones hair after he sweats outside... I adore the sound of his "real" laugh. I enjoy the sound of the oldest playing basket ball out side (as annoying as that may be at times).

I simply need to stop to listen more. THANK YOU.

Candi - Writer Of Life

[Bubo]

What a wonderful sound to be able to hear...........and sometimes we don't listen closely enough, do we?
Lovely write, and very descriptive.

It's the sound of children's
lil' footsteps while playing
hopscotch in heaven!