to breathe

I'm not sure whats happening

to touch would be awesome

but its not happening

to talk or hear your voice

would be awesome

but its not happening

 

to feel you breathe

upon my skin

would be awesome

but its not happening

 

its not happening

its not happening

 

i wish that I could

figure out what's going on

that'd be awesome

but its not happening

 

i need to feel

i need to love

i need to be loved

truly loved

that'd be awesome

but its not happening

 

its not happening

its not happening

 

i long to be kissed

ever so gently

would be awesome

but its not happening

 

i'm at a loss

for the first time

i'm so scared

for the first time

usually i'm so brave

but not now

i don't know how

 

to fix this

 

just to breathe

just to breathe

 

.............just breathe

 

 

Author's Note

this is how i feel right this moment

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hey..i hope the bad times are over now..dhatt..am sure they have vanished off...sometimes it pains..pains a lot..and very soul of the poem shook me whole.. i guess saying a word more will be insulting it's beauty.. all i can say is, it is one special piece or purely raw human emotions...though pain...but still unadulterated,,and chaste...

take care...and keep smiling... :)
niki.. :)

[Angel's Lady]

This is awesome! Great write! I like this very much. Thanks for writing this...