two is my everything.

two is my everything.

A Poem by Diane

They are my everything.
They are my life.
The sweet little nothings they 
whisper aren't alway nice.

They are my everything. 
They hold my heart.
Two little beings who have
torn my word apart.
From upside down to inside
out.

They are my life and I'm
 kind of theirs,
From the food fights in the 
kitchen to the cat fights down
 stairs.

They are my everything this I know 
for sure. Even when they are acting
like monsters I can't help but love 
them even more.

Bedtime is my favorite when they 
are tuckered as can be. The hugs the 
kisses clears it up for me. 






© 2016 Diane



Author's Note

Diane
Ignore grammar problems

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mou
such a sweet vanilla cream write..the most pure and unconditional love is mother's one only in this world..

Posted 2 Months Ago


yep - that's what happens :D

a lovely devotional poem - love until you burst X

Posted 2 Months Ago


Diane

2 Months Ago

Thank you!
Love your sweet poem. Imhave three grandboys and your loving words describe them so well. Good form and flow and rhyme. Love it!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Diane

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much
Grammar isn't the problem - an author having the confidence in his or her ability to express what they want to say is what needs to be driven. We are human, we have flaws - and gawd KNOWS "shyt" happens - to us ALL. We can learn to work WITH and ON our flaws as we correct perceptions (both ours and others).

I liked your thoughts and how they cascaded. You made them (your thoughts) personal.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Diane

11 Months Ago

Thank you. That was a "drop the mic review!"
a cute write here liked this

Posted 1 Year Ago


Diane

11 Months Ago

Oh thank you very much!
Awww!!! The joy of a mother's heart flowing through this poem... So beautifully written... The each and every activity of a child is something beautiful to his parents... Sweet and very well written work...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 1 Year Ago


Diane

11 Months Ago

Thanks! You are so right on about children.
loved this cute feeling and experience:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Diane

11 Months Ago

thank you. The the feeling and experience keep coming.
Is the poem about kids . It was nice and every line in the poem shows of your love and how they mean everything to you.
It was a great one . Enjoyed reading

Posted 1 Year Ago


Diane

1 Year Ago

thank you for the review.
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AUU
What happens when you have four?

lol

Liked the poem. Sweet.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Diane

1 Year Ago

If I had four it would be a longer poem lol. Thank you for the review.
the poem is about your kids i suppose. a good one

Posted 1 Year Ago


Diane

1 Year Ago

Thank you!

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