Mommy Rap

Mommy Rap

A Poem by Diane

123's and ABC's
After school work is mandatory
we sight work check
and do spelling too
cut and paste projects
until we turn blue

Learning isn't something that's just for school
Mommie's step and make the rules
Devise time is when your work is through
Mom will help take slack for you.

Weekend are weekends 
I let them chill
They can do as they please 
Or whatever they will
They bust their butt all week long
They get a break when the week is done

My job as mom is never done
I'll fight my hardest till school is fun
When summer comes
We can all relax
But until then 
They dare not slack







© 2018 Diane



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Hello, Diane, thank you for entering my contest! :)
I got a kick out of this one. The rhythm could have been smoother and I noticed a spelling error, but it was a fun read.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Diane

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much for the positive review. I'll correct what needs correcting.
mattavelli

3 Months Ago

Heardest = hardest, my guess.
Diane

3 Months Ago

Okay, I tried smoothing it out a tad and fixed the spelling error. Thanks for giving me a heads up.
oh, being a teacher, i really like this one...and glad they get to relax on the weekend...if they study hard, they deserve it...i like the beat of the poem...
so rhythmic.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Diane

6 Months Ago

I am not a teacher but I do teach them at home. I think they learn noir at home them they do at scho.. read more
Its a never ending task indeed, beautifully written and without one swear word, Amazing!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Diane

6 Months Ago

I am not a big fan of dropping F bombs in my writing. Real life i can't say I don't. (Filter needed).. read more
heardest - hardest...

This is a lovely poem about the trials and challenges of being a FULL_TIME mother. It is a poem that captures most aspects with aplomb. A great accomplishment

Posted 6 Months Ago


Diane

6 Months Ago

Thank you for the review!
Anything you can do to make it fun, Diane!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diane

6 Months Ago

I totally agree. I made them do anything that has anything to do with cutting and pasting though LOL

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Diane
Diane

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My name is Diane Garner and I live in southeast Michigan with with my husband and two young daughters. I grew up in Gaylord, Michigan, with My mom and brother. I moved to the Detroit area in my late t.. more..

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