Mommy Rap

123's and ABC's

After school work is mandatory

we sight work check

and do spelling too

cut and paste projects

until we turn blue

Learning isn't something that's just for school

Mommie's step and make the rules

Devise time is when your work is through

Mom will help take slack for you.

Weekend are weekends 

I let them chill

They can do as they please 

Or whatever they will

They bust their butt all week long

They get a break when the week is done

My job as mom is never done

I'll fight my hardest till school is fun

When summer comes

We can all relax

But until then 

They dare not slack

Reviews

[mattavelli]

Hello, Diane, thank you for entering my contest! :)
I got a kick out of this one. The rhythm could have been smoother and I noticed a spelling error, but it was a fun read.

[Diane]

Thank you so much for the positive review. I'll correct what needs correcting.

[mattavelli]

Heardest = hardest, my guess.

[Diane]

Okay, I tried smoothing it out a tad and fixed the spelling error. Thanks for giving me a heads up.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh, being a teacher, i really like this one...and glad they get to relax on the weekend...if they study hard, they deserve it...i like the beat of the poem...
so rhythmic.

[Diane]

I am not a teacher but I do teach them at home. I think they learn noir at home them they do at school at times.
Thank you for the review

[andrew mitchell]

Its a never ending task indeed, beautifully written and without one swear word, Amazing!

[Diane]

I am not a big fan of dropping F bombs in my writing. Real life i can't say I don't. (Filter needed) for real though, cursing ruins a good write.

[Ashwin Shanker]

heardest - hardest...

This is a lovely poem about the trials and challenges of being a FULL_TIME mother. It is a poem that captures most aspects with aplomb. A great accomplishment

[Diane]

Thank you for the review!

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Anything you can do to make it fun, Diane!

[Diane]

I totally agree. I made them do anything that has anything to do with cutting and pasting though LOL