Doesn't mean there isn't a forever.

Doesn't mean there isn't a forever.

A Poem by SarahCortland
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Sometimes we have to love whats best for us. In the end we see that it will be okay.

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I wanted you to love me
I wanted you to understand
I wanted you to see
I wanted you to hold my hand

Broken hearts take us far
Friends hold us together
Love leaves a scar
And there is no forever

I needed you to say you loved me
I needed to know you cared
I needed to be free
I needed my heart to be spared

Broken hearts take us far
Friends hold us together
Love leaves a scar
And there is no forever

I told you that I need you
I let you know it all
I told you all thats true
I begged you and you let me fall

Broken hearts take us far
Friends hold us together
Love leaves a scar
And there is no forever

I promised myself I wouldn't cry
I promised everyone I'd be well
I promised them all I would try
I broke all those promises and I fell

Broken hearts take us far
Friends hold us together
Love leaves a scar
And there is no forever

I saw that he loved me
I saw he could understand
I saw he could help me heal
I saw he would hold my hand

Broken hearts take us far
Friends hold us together
Love leaves a scar
doesn't mean there isn't a forever


© 2010 SarahCortland


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For some reason, I hear a melody within these lines. Blah, anyways, I think this is absolutely kawaii yet sad and true at the same time. Wonderful write. I see the pattern between repetition and it's adorable, flowling finely. I complment you for sharing this lovely write.

P.S. Kawaii just means cute in japanese.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A beautifully horrible love story. This is amazing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


How very lyrical. This to me is a song.

My favorite lines:
Broken hearts take us far
Friends hold us together

- That's truth right there. Wonderful poem!
Simple. I like it.

Keep writing,
Alex

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very sweet, interesting how you've changed the last line of your repeating stanza, you end up hopeful towards the end. I like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I agree with Deaths cold kiss, this sounds like a sad but beautiful song. Great piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


fabulous loveorhate


Posted 13 Years Ago


omg this is amazing :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww. It's so sad.:(

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this sounds like a song. its sad, but, i really like this. and i agree with you

Posted 13 Years Ago


Advice Want less Need less and you will be happier to find those things within yourself

Posted 13 Years Ago



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SarahCortland
SarahCortland

Owensboro, KY



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My name is Myspace Layouts. I love to Write poetry and I am currently working on one book. Sometimes I write short stories but Poetry is what i like to Stick to. Confidence Quotes .. more..

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