Abuse

abusive relationship that ended

The bruises

The bluff

The cuts

Arent they enough?

 

Your anger

Your fear

I'm listenning

I can hear

 

Your shouting

I'm crying

Your smacking

I keep lying

 

I'm on floor

your hitting

I'm begging

Your spitting

 

Am I not woth it?

Are you more?

Pleading doesn't help?

A swinging door.

 

A gun

please help me 

a trigger pulled

blood for all to see

 

no funeral

no casket

no one to see

nothing but a basket

 

a girl

a life

one gone

but an end to stife

 

The bruises

The bluff

The cuts

Weren't they enough?

 

Reviews

[Alessander]

I like the refrain.

[lawrence bear]

you have touched my soul with this write, emotional, sad, fear was all here.
great write,
lawrence

[kirstey Lost,Crushed,Co..]

wow very well done :)

[Mary]

good rhyme sceam, i like how you displayed the abuse. Good job.

[*Always be Me:)*]

wow...very interesting. kinda sad at a point, but i like it.

[Sabbath_Nikole]

Interesting how you go back and forth between the abused and the abuser. I like that. Pretty sad ending of a life.

[C.J.G.]

Wow. I am at a loss for words. This is very intense, yet very amazing.

[Senseless whatever]

I like this, the form helps get the point across.

[Wolfe Greytome]

not bad. quick and jerky, kinda like somebody hitting something. Overall, a nice effect for this piece.

[emily]

mice portrayal of emotion, the quick, short lines and stanzas helped the effect