All I Ever Wanted Was You- And A Big Tub Of Snickers.

All I Ever Wanted Was You- And A Big Tub Of Snickers.

A Poem by Jason Young

I can feel the craving

Racing up my skin

Compound this stay-for feeling

No one's going to win

 

Miss you every second

You are not right here

Darling, for you I am weakened

Of you, I must fear

 

Girl, I think I love you

But I know I can't be sure

Release me from your voodoo

Help me find my cure.

© 2008 Jason Young


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I don't see a point of adding to it, and the title is half of the poem! Excellent, and loved it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


nice i like the end it was a good poem and i think you could add a little to it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Jason Young
Jason Young

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