"Do You Know The Man Who Gave Up?"

Do you? Really? Cause I do.

Remember the man who gave up?
Neither does anybody else,
They all said he couldn't take it,
They all said he killed himself.

He was brave and strong they said,
Helped anyone who needed advice,
But his life wasn't near perfect,
So he had to pay the price.

He is missed they said
With sorrow hanging in their chest,
Especially by his two sisters,
Since they loved him best

Someone asked me today,
If I knew the man who wanted to die
I told them no,
The most obvious lie.

I do know the man who gave up,
And I'll speak out like any other
I know this man very well,
Because he was my brother.

Reviews

[Jaded Mermaid]

I remember this from the first time it was posted and I don't know if I said it but it helped me through something, and it sends a really positive message to a lot of other people too despite being weighed in with sadness tunnels. It shows the message of hope for better, a future bright, a blank page with rose petals glittering dreams true, the nightmares gone, life all your own.