Views

Views of the world while I sit outside my house

Sit outside your house and look all around you.
Look to your left and look to right.
Look down and up.
Ask mind of what do you see.
Ask your heart of what you see

Both may have different views
But they agree that life is beautiful
Life can inspire anyone
The views u witness can calm the troubles in your soul
The view u witness can allow u to find yourself
 Next time when u feel like everything is lost
and you can't go on

Sit outside your house and look all around u.
Look to your left and look to right.
Look down and up.
Ask mind of what do u see.
Ask your heart of what u see
and all will be clear

Reviews

[deeps]

This is wonderful, I enjoyed this write.

[vinny ciambriello]

Nice. Left out some words like 'you' and 'your', but this is small stuff. The point of getting outside yourself rings clear and strong.