Life Path

The riddles of Life plague the soul
Wandering down Life's path
Searching for any answers
That can enrapture the being of all

Down this path lies advisers
With good or bad attention
Advocate actions to gain our truth
Sadly most die trying to find the truth of themselves
They die a chary death

Others gain morsel of clarity
Which is better then nothing
Those that are fortunate
To reach their end path
Are rewarded with a grand sapphire
Within its contents is an eternal essence
After you die happy knowing

Reviews

[JENY]

Very true…….
Are you really in search of truth?
Nice reading…

[just rose.]

you really used the words well here!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great free form poem. I love the topic you chose to write about and you made you point very well. I love how you used the words for this week.

[Jenny Nelson]

To the point. Well put. Great use of the words given this week. The search for the truth... so much damage done and time wasted while we're looking. Time would be better spent using our hearts and hands instead of our heads.

Very strong and thought provoking piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the wisdom in your words. We must see through the B.S to see the truth. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote