lady chocolate cosmos

lady chocolate cosmos

 

i do not know who you are

nor do i even know your name

i do not know what makes you smile

neither what makes you cry

i do not know your favourite song

nor what makes you feel like dancing

i do not know your favourite colour

nor which dress suits you perfectly

i wish i could talk to you and get all the answers

but i do not know the number to call either

i wonder if you will love the way i will say your name

as we smile starring straight into each other’s eyes

will you laugh at my jokes

even the ones not funny to the rest of the world

will i hear you in every whisper in the soft blowing wind

 or see you in my every shadow on the ground

will you stick around when things are not perfect

and tell me you love me every time we fight

will i hold you every morning and feel your silky skin

will you let me kiss your mellow lips every time we meet;

smell your sweet vanillin scent

and tell you that i love you

 

will I ever find you my sweet lady chocolate cosmos

 

By  MI-KOL HIGHLY

Michael Thando Nota

Reviews

[walkingman117]

(Hi... I haven't been around writer's cafe for a while, so I didn't see your review request 'till now...)

I liked it! Good flow, and I think the lack of punctuation / capital letters works well. At the end, after 'meet', there is a semi-colon... on purpose?

Also, I liked the part
'will you laugh at my jokes
even the ones not funny to the rest of the world'

[Laminators Dubai]

sooo beautiful but its feels too frustrating...that the people we love...cant even meet...

really loved it...^^

[MI-KOL HIGHLY]

I find it hard to understand the people who always say they found the right one...i have been with a few i thought where the right ones but they just became "...one too many...". May be the right ones are there...but like you said "it feels so frustrating"...but who knows the future anyway...

Thanks... :)

[Laminators Dubai]

maybe i should use word "desperate"....
thanks ^^

[MI-KOL HIGHLY]

maybe i should say ..."very understandable to be desperate"...

[Laminators Dubai]

ha ha ha...life is cold...
love ya ^^

[MI-KOL HIGHLY]

mutual feeling...

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Seems your delving in the the lines of this one...so you write about it instead...with this verse...of what she would be in reality...yet the last line still gives in to the question:

will I ever find you my sweet lady chocolate cosmos

[MI-KOL HIGHLY]

I'm slightly failing to read your emotion in the comment...pardon but may you say more?

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I do not believe this need any more interpretation...you are writing about a woman you wish to find one day...

[MI-KOL HIGHLY]

Oh i see...anyway let me say its a pleasure to get a review. Have visited your profile a couple of times and i should say your writing is exquisite. #Inspired.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Thanks for stopping by...and your request to be a friend...good to read this one...

[MI-KOL HIGHLY]

...the feeling is mutual...

[MI-KOL HIGHLY]

feeling is mutual...thanks...