Words for the Estranged

Words for the Estranged

A Poem by Jared Fellows
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My first acrostic.

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Brick walls that stand in mankind’s way the

English Empire’s sun has set for good

Now when the world is gone when

Everything is deranged and disturbed

Voices die

Oh the lord will cry while the

Lies sing

Enter as the hand that throws

Nero’s fiddle to the stagnant Earth

Carry yourself as the savior

Entangle yourself in the mess of cleansing the Earth of distress


© 2009 Jared Fellows



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This was pretty interesting.
I don't believe you need to do any fixing, cause it sounds okay to me.


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Jared Fellows
Jared Fellows

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