MY VERY FIRST LOVE

MY VERY FIRST LOVE

A Poem by myrt2013
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A romantic rendition to first love's endurance - (From a fiction novel)

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MY VERY FIRST LOVE
(c) Mirta Oliva

(From the fiction novel SUBLIME ADOPTION ~
A Tale of Love and Mendacity)

(Dedicated to Frederic)

My first love...
Stormy feelings
Palpitate in my heart
Pure, unforgettable
Forever to last.

In a somber night
Alone at the beach
I throw
Loving words to the wind
And draw
In the moist, cool sand
Your name and mine
Inside a big, pierced heart ….

For the world to see
How we were meant to be
From the very start...
Our love shall forever last
Nothing can take us apart!

 

--All poems and artwork are the property of Mirta Oliva--

© 2013 myrt2013


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Do any of us forget the first one? How marvelous to tread there, oblivious to all the pitfalls. Your poem does an excellent job of reminding us.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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myrt2013

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Samuel! Everybody has had a first love; nonetheless, beyond those initial feelings there ma.. read more

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Self-published author -4 books - BIRDYJOSH and BIRDYLU ~ A Paper Birds' Story; SUBLIME ADOPTION ~ A Tale of Love and Mendacity; Book of Diverse Writings ~ Vol. I (Short stories, anecdotes, essays) and.. more..

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