Rain

Rain

A Poem by Zahra
"

Cinquain 1

"
Rain

Cool, fervent

pouring, ringing, enthralling

like electrified hope's ballet

Downpour.

24/09/2014.

© 2014 Zahra



Author's Note

Zahra
First attempt on cinquain.
Thanks for reading. ♡

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I never came across this type of poem - im intrigued !! Its shape > seems almost like a spearhead - you may be the point man (sorry woman) for this wave of cinquain Zahra.
The writing - I totally got that you were buzzed by the arriving rain !

here have 100 green italic points for introducing me to a new form and for good writing

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zahra

3 Years Ago

Thanks ANTO. Apparently there are few other methods of writing cinquain, I chose this one for my fir.. read more



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So many ways to write a cinquian Zahra, I like this way that you have used and i also enjoyed how "Rain" graduated to "Downpour"..

Posted 3 Years Ago


Zahra

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much Stella. :-)
Though short this type of poem is energetic and vital, all the best
sayed

Posted 3 Years Ago


Zahra

3 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Sayed
SAYED THANGAL

3 Years Ago

most welcome dear
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I never came across this type of poem - im intrigued !! Its shape > seems almost like a spearhead - you may be the point man (sorry woman) for this wave of cinquain Zahra.
The writing - I totally got that you were buzzed by the arriving rain !

here have 100 green italic points for introducing me to a new form and for good writing

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zahra

3 Years Ago

Thanks ANTO. Apparently there are few other methods of writing cinquain, I chose this one for my fir.. read more
This is nice, Zahra. True to form. Excellent use of words.

High marks. Greatly enjoyed.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zahra

3 Years Ago

Oh, thank you very much Rick. Means a lot.
Zahra.
Nice piece about rain. I am developing a book about it, a compilation.
This is a wonderful cinquain. Happy writing!


Posted 3 Years Ago


Zahra

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Zahra

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
This is very playful. Thank you,

If nothing else surely the rain is worth living for...
and much else wonderful bounty

Posted 3 Years Ago


Zahra

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much for this beautiful comment.
a great picture of rain i chose this one because it is raining here today
rain is life,a transfusion from god

Posted 3 Years Ago


Zahra

3 Years Ago

thank you wordman
 wordman

3 Years Ago

my pleasure
"electrifed hope's ballet"

i wish i would have thought of that metaphor...

this poem is electric...all those good things about the rain, which we so often swear at when it is coming down...

i like to drink it up...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Zahra

3 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Jacob :)
Zahra

3 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Jacob :)
"Rain
Cool, fervent
pouring, ringing, enthralling
like electrified hope's ballet
Downpour."

Posted 3 Years Ago



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