Me

Me

A Poem by Fabiola Sully
"

this was written when I was in college going through some things

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Me

 

I know I have made some mistakes.

I know I have problems to deal with.

Dealing with the pressures of society,

And the way my mind is going.

It may seem that I'm going crazy.

That I'm losing my head.

I'm hearing noises,

From both sides.

Trying to set me straight.

But they are not helping me.

All I see is people giving me opinions.

Making my condition worse.

But I am starting to see things,

In a different light.

They canot rid of them.

and they can't leave on their own.

The only person,

who can put control in this situation is.....

ME!

© 2008 Fabiola Sully


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thank you very much

Posted 15 Years Ago


Lovely!
And it is the "ME" the only person that can know what "I" have to do and see what "myself" is going trough, so... others opinions are theirs and "I"only can hear them, analize them and take from them what ever serves "ME" and is good for "myself"!
Wonderful!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I notice one typo "Makig" overall it is different then what i expected. Good job overall

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Fabiola Sully
Fabiola Sully

uniondale, NY



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my name is Fabiola and i am from brooklyn, new york. i current work as a medical record clerk for a doctor's office. i have been writing since i was 17 years old. i write poetry and i am working on my.. more..

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