The Infinite Way

The Infinite Way

A Poem by Derek Cummings

Goodbye cities, goodbye society, goodbye roads...
I'm flying to...the moon, stars, oz, who knows
But be assured it's a place without an end,
where a road doesn't exist, 
because roads eventually do end,
But a place, where tangibility and imagination coincide,    
where exist an unfixed route that merely travels within, 
where expectations are boundless  
and bigotry and ignorance aren't a trend. 
I'm going to write of course.

© 2012 Derek Cummings



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It's exactly how I feel when I begin to the write. Half of the stories I wrote don't even have an end yet. Not sure if I want to let it end. Your poem is enchanting nevertheless.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Derek Cummings

3 Years Ago

I know this is a 11 months old, but thanks for the read and feedback. I have hard time letting my st.. read more
I like this poem especially the lines:
where a road doesn't exist,
because roads eventually do end.
A lot of wisdom in this write.


Posted 5 Years Ago


Derek Cummings

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the read. Where one road ends, may a another be created, figuratively speaking of course:.. read more
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

Yep . You are welcome .
The ending brings it all together in one sudden realization and furthermore, an explanation of what is truly going on here. Seldom do you see those reveal the meaning behind a poem and making such an impact with it. Kudos.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Derek Cummings

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. Peace.
I love the break from common rhyme schemes, it provides heaps more emphasis than otherwise provided

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Derek Cummings

5 Years Ago

Yea. I like to mix it up. Thanks for the comment.
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A very well done poem. I really enjoyed the overall message behind it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Derek Cummings

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the comment...
It works for me... poetry is my greatest love.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Derek Cummings

5 Years Ago

Thanks Sharon!
This path of your mindscape brings the imagination to life... creates a mood of rising, fluttering hope.... Here is endless possibility and life's great mystery.

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Derek Cummings

5 Years Ago

Well said Craig.
I felt the flow of this one and wrote it free style and unedited

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Derek Cummings
Derek Cummings

Valdosta, GA



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I've had a passion for writing for years, both fiction, nonfiction and poetry. Writing novels allows me to unravel my imagination and put my creativity to use. I enjoyed my writing instructor in colle.. more..

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