Goodbye

Goodbye

A Poem by Brave girl
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I promise that I won't cry
I guess it's time for me to go
I guess it's it is my last goodbye 

I promise I will remember your love and care mother 
and I will sure miss your words dad
and my friends, I hope you'll remember those times that we laughed together
because actually it was one of the best moments I've ever had

But it's time for me to say goodbye
I guess it was was more than just a drive by.

God I cry out to you
before I come to death
I will do good for this life 
untill my last breath

No turning back
I begin to fall
into the darkness
I hear it call.

© 2013 Brave girl


Author's Note

Brave girl
read bitween the lines!

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This is full of meaning. I read it several times and think it could mean about 3 different things. I am glad you leave the authors note.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Brave girl

9 Years Ago

haha thank you for the review, it means a lot
Awww, so sweet words. Beautiful poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Brave girl

9 Years Ago

thaaaaaaaaank you for another sweet review XD
it a song by avril lavigne movie jack and jill
"Goodbye"

Goodbye, goodbye, goodbye my love
I can't hide, can't hide, can't hide what has come

I have to go
I have to go
I have to go
And leave you alone
But always know
Always know
Always know that I love you so
I love you so
I love you so, oh

Goodbye brown eyes
Goodbye for now
Goodbye sunshine
Take care of yourself

I have to go
I have to go
I have to go
And leave you alone
But always know
Always know
Always know that I love you so
I love you so, oh
I love you so, oh

La lullaby
Distract me with your rhymes
La lullaby

La lullaby
Help me sleep tonight
La lullaby
(La lullaby, la lullaby)

I have to go (goodbye)
I have to go (lullaby)
I have to go (goodbye)
And leave you alone

But always know (goodbye)
Always know (brown eyes)
Always know (goodbye)
That I love you so

I love you so (goodbye lullaby)
I love you so, oh (goodbye)
I love you so (goodbye brown eyes)
I love you so (goodbye)
I love you so
I love you so

Goodbye brown eyes
Goodbye my love

Posted 10 Years Ago


i read it two times and its beautiful (i mean bad becoz its "goodby")
that was something good.
i am a comedian so just easy on my comment.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brave girl

10 Years Ago

lol thanks for the nice review :)
Laminators Dubai

10 Years Ago

that was nice for you well i can do better then that
*tada* read my stupid paragraph and comme.. read more
Brave girl

10 Years Ago

lol.......
Here again a creative Imaginary i can see in your words. You've to write some more on it. Your theme's great. Keep it up :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brave girl

10 Years Ago

thank you a lot dear writer :)
Wow. I could feel the sorrow and agony leaving your family and friends and fall into the darkness of life .
We all reach that point due to depression or just want to be independent to pursue our own path.
A very good write...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Good to know...Wonderful...:)
Brave girl

10 Years Ago

yay.. LOL!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)..........

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