My brightest star *

All was fine
When she was mine.
We used to drink wine,
When we sat to dine!

Our love was full of passion,
The one, never out of fashion!
Her love was for me, real deep,
I never wanted to make her weep!!

She was my love,
Beautiful like dove!
We cuddled and kissed,
But one day, she got pissed!!

She heard that I was cheating,
She faught and kept on repeating!
I tried and tried and tried,
But she climbed up the ceiling!!

I begged her-"No, no dear",
My heart was filled with fear,
I said-"Look baby, I'm here ",
Then on my cheek, fell a tear!!

I asked her to believe me,
Said I loved no one but she,
My bad, she didn't believe me,
And jumped from there and left me!!

I cried on that day like a new born,
Her death left me shocked, full torn!
If only she could see
I loved her, more than me!!

But she is somewhere in the sky,
Above the world, very high.
She shines there, the brightest star,
I talk to her and it makes me cry,
I just stand here waiting to die,
So I could unite, with my star!!

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

This is a very sad one. I like the way you expressed your emotions.

[jesserose99]

This is just oozing with charm in the beginning and a tug at your heart at the end...if only she knew! So enjoyed this!