Nothingness In the Heart

This poem has received First Place

Body Snatcher with a Pulse! Oct 5, 2008

 

 

Inspired by a Lyric 8 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 Nothingness In the Heart

Nothingness lives

In faces that are lost

In hands that don't feel

Breath interrupted

And eyes do not see ... when

Hearts are full of love ... that realize

Unrequited moments of pain

 

 

Nothingness lives

In faces aglow

In hands so gentle

Gasping for breath

Eyes glazed over

Hearts intertwined together

Forever

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Tammy]

Very nice.

[Jeff Bresee]

Very interesting. The more I think about it, the more I like it.

[DarkAngelWriter]

Hm, I actually really really like this. I didn't really think I would, because it's all 'pink' and 'pink' sure as hell isn't the mood of the song, but you did REALLY good. Thanks for entering! :)

[Fran Marie]

So Beautifully penned and well expressed in

great format and presentation

Fran Marie