Smoky Waters

Smokey Waters

 

Smokey waters extinguise flames

Burning out of control

Call down the rain

Join at water's edge

 

Whispering winds

Feed not the flames of stirfe

Stand still your ground

And allow the rain to fall

 

Smoky waters go to the extreme

Slush around us to and fro

Drinch each and every spark

Until flames burn no more

Author's Note

I wrote this piece after choosing the title, as I do all my poems and books. I hope you like my Smoky Waters

Reviews

[deeps]

This is wonderful. I enjoyed this write.

[Sister Suzie]

This is one of my favorites.

[poet2angels (lynda)]

Beauiful title for a lovely poem. I think it is so interesting that you choose the title and then write the poem...I am often inspired by titles ...

Excellent piece!
Lynda