Salvation Prayer

inside womam                   

(ears hear a cry)                   

heart soul                     

and mind                     

burdens lay                     

                                   P  heavy on slumping shoulders  P

                               R     during times of pain and strife   R

                            A                  heart beats loud                 A

                         Y                      like drumming                      Y

                            I                   deep within me                  I

                               N                  aching pain                 N

                                   G            churning heat            G

        melting a sinful soul for all the world to see

        on bended knee, I pray to God up in heaven

        save my soul and cleanse me from all my sins

        I repent!

        I repent!

         Amen!                  

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

This is great Nancy~ very creative and nicely penned~Fran

[Reality]

wow, very creative, and a lovely poem too, great job :)

[Laura E. Aranda]

The shape is sooo cool! how did you do that? I want to do that! haha