Storm Clouds

Storm Clouds

Pretty Good job Oct 13, 2008
 

 

 

Storm clouds brings rolling thunder

Clapping loudly in our ears

Shivering and huddling under

Umbrellas as we express our fears

 

 

 

Storm clouds bring flashing lightning

Streaking across the sky

Jagged lights are so frightening

Hissing the thunder’s loud reply

 

 

 

Storm clouds bring torrents of rain

Drenching hill and dale

Running down my windowpane

And splashing in the pail

 

 

 

Storm clouds bring many frowns

For God’s children everywhere

Jumping at those frightening sounds

Each whispering a tiny prayer

 

 

 

God in heaven sent this stormy maze

Knowing that our prayers would come

But if we prayed on sunny days

God wouldn’t have snapped his thumb

 

 

Did He get your attention?

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I liked this. One typo in the first line "clouds brings" should just be "bring". Nice descriptions.